Document: draft-ietf-enum-msg-02.txt
Reviewer: Mary Barnes
Date: 1 september 2004 


Assignment: 
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http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-enum-msg-02.txt 

IANA Registration for ENUMservices email, fax, mms, ems and sms 
(Proposed Standard) - 3 of 7 
Note: Hayes reviewed and found no problem with sms/mms/ems (3GPP. 
    material) in here (Jul 2004) 
Token: Allison Mankin 
Reviewer: Mary Barnes 

Summary: 
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With the correction of the nits identified below, this draft should be ready for publication. 

 Nits: 
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1. Status of this Memo. Needs updating for the new template for IPR, etc. (per RFC 3668) 

2. Section 4.Ê Security Considersations section needs rewording. Propose to change from: 
   
   " An fax number as any other phone number may give not so much privacy 
   away then a name in the format user@host (e.g.Ê an email or sip 
   address), but there is still the risk of unwanted messages." 
   to something like: 
   
   "Although a fax number, like other E.164 numbers,Ê doesn't appear to reveal as 
   much identity information about a user 
   as a name in the format user@host (e.g.Ê an email or sip 
   address), the information is still publicly available, thus there is still 
   the risk of unwanted communication." 

 3. Section 8.1. Reference [5] needs updating to latest version.