Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-ipv6-dns-configuration-04.txt
From: Brian E Carpenter
Date: 27 oktober 2004 

Suitable for Informational, but IMHO needs another update.

I've read this draft several times in its life
and it is useful guidance.

The authors have done a rather quick job in responding
to the deprecation of Site Local addresses - in both places
that they are mentioned, the text is rather imprecise.

In Security Considerations, we find:

>    For security considerations of each approach, refer to the    
> corresponding drafts [5]-[9].

[5] - [7] are RFCs
[8] - [9] are indeed drafts, and I'm a bit concerned about having
"work in progress" references for security issues. If the issues
are serious, surely we should have a summary in line?

Some nits:

>   The document seems to lack an IANA Considerations section
>   Checking conformance with RFC 3667/3668 boilerplate...
>   The document seems to lack an RFC 3667 Section 5.1 IPR Disclosure 
> Acknowledgement   -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching 
> beginning. Boilerplate error?
>   Warnings:
>     There are 18 instances of lines with hyphenated line breaks in the 
> document.

     Brian