Document: draft-ietf-dhc-subscriber-id-06.txt
Reviewer: Mark Allman
Date: 18 August 2004

-06 to squeeze this out?  Really?  Sheesh.


This i-d seems ready to publish to me.  The idea seems simple and the
document is clear and concise.  If the document is to be revised again I
would suggest a couple of nits.  But, they are very much not show
stoppers.

Section 2: I am not exactly sure what you mean by "edge device" -- I'd
add a little text around that and/or change it to something more
descriptive of what is meant.

Section 5: You note that there is no special additional processing for
this suboption.  But, that is not quite right, is it?  I think there
could be additional processing to look at it and use it as part of a
decision function.  My guess is that you mean there is no required
processing.  Is that it?  If not, then a few more words to clarify this
thought would be worthwhile.


allman