Document:   draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-node-id-based-hello-02.txt
Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins [spencer@mcsr-labs.org]
Review Date:  Sunday 2/12/2006 10:25 PM CST
IESG Telechat Date:  Thursday, 16 February 2006

Summary: This document is on the right track for publication as a BCP. 
Although the document is pretty densely written, it's not too hard to 
follow, especially given that this draft is a clarification of an existing 
specification, so not something a implementer would pick up without any 
previous background on the topic area.

Review comment: There was one point that I wish was explained better - there 
are five different places in the draft where a statement like "use of 
Node-ID based Hello session is optimal for detecting signaling adjacency 
failure" is made , but "optimal" is never explained or put in context. I can 
guess what I think it means, but I'm guessing, and a sentence or two of 
explanation might make the document clearer for many readers.