Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-mpls-gmpls-interwork-reqts-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2007-12-21
IESG Telechat date: 2007-12-20

Summary: Ready

Comments: some editorial comments to leasve to the RFC Editor:
 - Abstract page 1: A MPLS-TE -> An MPLS-TE
 - 1 page 3: the top of the page 3 has perhaps a pb:
  "GMPLS protocols were developed as ..."
 - 3.1 page 5: is the 'adjacencies' word in a dictionary?
 - 3.9 page 6 (and some others): please introduce list with a sentence
  finishing by ':'.
 - 4 page 7: the border routers form part -> the border routers are part?
 - 4 page 7: the position of the Security Considerations is unusual but
  I don't believe it matters as soon as there is one.
 - 5.1 page 9: All three LSP types MAY -> All the three LSP types MAY?
 - 5.3 page 9: please introduce the FRR abbrev