Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-lsp-stitching-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2007-08-12
IETF LC End Date: 2007-08-16
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Comments: there are only some editorial comments, i.e., things which should
be handled by the RFC editor:
 - abstract page 2: from from -> from
 - TOC page 3: for LSP_ATTRIBUTES Object -> for the ...?
 - 2 page 5: are required -> are required to
 - 5.1 page 8: LSP ([RFC3473]), to -> LSP ([RFC3473]) to
 - 5.1.1 page 8: some other e2e LSP. -> some other e2e LSPs.?
 - 5.1.1 page 8: in the Resv, -> in the Resv message,
 - 5.1.1.1 page 9: in the Resv Label. -> in the Resv message.?
 - 5.1.2 page 10: bandwidth, local TE -> bandwidth or local TE
 - 5.1.2 page 11: a Path Msg -> a Path message
 - 5.1.2 page 11: a PathErr with the error codes ->
   a PathErr message with the error code?
 - 5.1.3 page 11: I can't parse this sentence (commas?):
   An e2e LSP traversing an S-LSP, SHOULD record in the RRO for that
   hop, an identifier corresponding to the S-LSP TE link.
 - 5.2.3 page 14: PCE -> Path Computation Element
 - 10 page 18: please add ", USA" after ZIP codes.

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