Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-overlay-05.txt
Review: Spencer Dawkins
Date: 3 januari 2005 


This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Very minor nits (could certainly be addressed in AUTH48):

- The abstract refers to "the overlay model" without
  explanation. Could a few words be added, something like "the overlay
  model, where edge nodes are unaware of the topology of the core
  nodes"?

- Some terms are introduced without expansion on first use (I noticed
  ERO and RRO).

- I'm not sure what a "lower trust model" is, in Security
  Considerations. Is there a clearer term that could be used ("less
  trust required")?

Spencer