Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ason-reqts-07.txt
From: Lucy E. Lynch
Date: 27 oktober 2004 

Requirements for Generalized MPLS (GMPLS) Signaling Usage
and Extensions for Automatically Switched Optical Network (ASON)
draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ason-reqts-07.txt

"This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication."

Needs an IANA section -

idnits 1.46 (25 Oct 2004)

draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ason-reqts-07.txt:

  The document seems to lack an IANA Considerations section
  Checking conformance with RFC 3667/3668 boilerplate...

  Warnings:
    There are 11 instances of lines with hyphenated line breaks in the
document.

NOTES:

Incorporates  ITU-T SG15, Q.14/15 comments as noted here:

https://www.ietf.org/IESG/LIAISON/itut-sg15-ls-re-draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ason-reqts.html
https://www.ietf.org/IESG/LIAISON/ietf-ccamp-lr-itut-sg15-ason.html

as well as changes proposed by Jonathan Sadler in San Diego, see the
ccamp thread on ASON Opacity:
http://ops.ietf.org/lists/ccamp/ccamp.2004/msg00929.html

Question:
Is there a formal process for incorporating feedback from the ITU?

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