Document; draft-ietf-avt-rtp-framing-contrans-05.txt
Reviewer: Avri Doria
Review Date: 18 August 2005
LC Date: 15 August 2005

Title: Framing RTP and RTCP Packets over Connection-Oriented Transport

Summary: Ready with questions.

While somewhat difficult to read because of its frequent reference to
numbered normative references, this seems ready for PS.

Questions:
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Introduction:

    In this memo, we document the method and show how a session description
    [4] may specify the use of the method.
    
 Does the method refer to the method currently in use in earlier
 versions or a new method?   This was not clear to me.
    

 Section 3  last paragrapgh
    
 There is a capitialized word DOES.  Is this supposed to have some
 special meaning?  I know it is not a 2026 word, but is there a reason
 for the captialization?  I seems to me that it might be confusing.
    
    
 
 Note:
    
  This draft makes so much use of references that it would be much clearer
  if it followed the recommended convention of using references like [RFC3550]
  instead of [1].