Document: draft-ietf-avt-rfc2793bis-09.txt
Review: Brian E Carpenter
Date: 1 december 2004 

Michael Patton already reviewed this and I concur; it is
about ready. There are boilerplate and format errors:

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  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:

    Checking conformance with RFC 3667/3668 boilerplate...  The
    document seems to lack an RFC 3667 Section 5.1 IPR Disclosure
    Acknowledgement -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching
    beginning. Boilerplate error?

    The document seems to lack an RFC 3667 Section 5.4 Copyright
    Notice
    -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning.
    Boilerplate error?

    The document seems to lack an RFC 3668 Section 5, para 1 IPR
    Disclosure Acknowledgement -- however, there's a paragraph with a
    matching beginning. Boilerplate error?


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    The document seems to lack a 1id_guidelines paragraph about 6
    months document validity -- however, there's a paragraph with a
    matching beginning. Boilerplate error?

    The document seems to lack a 1id_guidelines paragraph about the
    list of current Internet-Drafts -- however, there's a paragraph
    with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error?


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    There are 1 instance of lines with hyphenated line breaks in the
    document.  Line 457 has weird spacing: '... second inter...'

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