Document: draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3732bis-03.txt
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern [joel@stevecrocker.com]
Review Date:  Sunday 10/15/2006 3:57 PM CST
IESG Telechat Date: 26 October 2006

Summary:  This document is ready for publication as a draft standard.
The implementation report seems quite sufficient to justify advancement.

I have no opinion on the down-ref issue, as I have not tried to 
determine the actual current rules.

nit: I believe the last paragraph of 1.1 (in which "ns1.example1.com 
MUST be treated as an internal host") assumes that example1.com and 
example2.com are both handled by the same repository (since the 
notion of internal / external is described as relative to a 
repository.)  But the text does not say that they are both 
represented in the same repository.

nit: I believe the MAY in line 2 of 2.3 (Status Values) is a 
MUST.  Or a "may".  But not MAY.  It does not give 
permission.  Rather, it is restricting who is able to perform an 
operation.(line 5 uses a proper MAY.)