Document: draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3731bis-04.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia Review Date: 2006-10-17 IETF LC Date: 2006-10-12 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a draft standard. Comments: The document is well written and very clear. Perhaps the only comment is that Section 1.1., which his part of the introduction, contains some normative text (MAY, OPTIONAL, MUST, etc.). In my opinion, normative text shouldn't be present in Introductions, but elsewhere in the normative description of the text.