Document: SMPTE URN Definition (draft-edwards-urn-smpte-01.txt)

Reviewer: Eric Gray
Review Date:  05/29/2007
IETF LC End Date:  05/29/2007

Summary:
This document is not ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Comments:

In the security considerations section, the author indicates that
there are known security issues with "use and resolution of URNs 
in general" but does not provide a reference to where these issues
are addressed (or at least identified).

If such a reference exists, this section should cite that reference
and the author should add that reference to the list of (informative) 
references.  If no such reference exists, I am not sure what value
including this statement offers.

NITs:

In the first paragraph of the Introduction, third sentence, 8th
line: I recommend replacing "their" with "a committee's"...