Document: draft-djernaes-netflow-9-transport-00 Reviewer: John Loughney Date: March 30, 2004 This draft is heading in the right direction, but needs at least a revision. 1) Missing IPR test 2) Remove references from abstract. 3) Need a terminology section, couldn't find what an 'observation domain' is. What is a SID. 4) Generally, it seems that this is a 00 draft, it probably needs a good rewrite. 5) Some grammer problems. 6) Section 2.1 packet size mentions MTU, might want to expand on how to determine the path MTU.