Document: draft-blunk-rpslng-05 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Date: June 18, 2004 This draft is basically ready for publication as a proposed standard, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. The required IPR disclose (section 5.1 of RFC 3667) does not occur. Section 2.2 states " is mandatory within the new multi-protocol attributes". In the section defining these multi-protocol attributes, the text says "Note that the afi specification is optional." Is it mandatory or optional? BNF is used to define the structure of the value of the attributes. While the usage is pretty simple, it is in fact not quite IETF standard ABNF. And it does not define the syntax or reference a definition for it. (I presume the attribute definition syntax is from RFC 2622, but this text does not say that.) In section 5, the syntax for mnt-routes reads: mnt-routes list of optional, multi-valued [{list of } or ANY] This seems to remove the possibility, shown in the slightly earlier example, of mixing IPv4 and IPv6 route prefixes?