Draft: draft-ietf-simple-presence-data-model-06.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: Wednesday 11/23/2005 8:54 AM CST (as reported by Brian based on SMS from Elwyn) and Tuesday 11/29/2005 4:42 PM CST by Elwyn himself LC Date: 11/25/2005 Telechat Date: Thursday, Dec. 1st 2005 Summary: Ready with nits. Review: -------- This document appears to be ready give or take some editorial nits which will be picked up by the RFC Editor. I will file my list of nits when I have more time. I already messaged Brian to let him know my conclusions on the Last call. LC Review (as reported by Brian): ---------------------------------- Elwyn Davies is on vacation in New Zealand, but with extraordinary zeal, he sent me an SMS message with a Gen-ART mini-review of draft-ietf-simple-presence-data-model-06.txt [Duh, I don't know how to get SMS messages from my cell phone into my email.] Almost ready with nits Should note that it updates 2778 and 3863 [in the Abstract]. [BC - 2778 is given as an Informative reference. Are we sure it isn't actually a downref Normative reference?] Editorial nits to be sent later. Brian, channelling Elwyn