Document: draft-ietf-psamp-protocol-08.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan [suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com] Review Date: 11/5/2007 IESG Telechat Date: 11/5/2007 Summary: This draft is almost ready, but I have a couple of comments. * I think section 3.1 should be removed and be replaced with a reference to the IPFIX proto terminology section. Since it is copied and pasted in here, it cannot pickup any changes to the IPFIX proto document (say in AUTH48). * Similarly, the terminology from psamp-sample-tech is copied over and is out of sync with the psamp-sample-tech-10 draft. * If conflicting terminology exists in IPFIX and PSAMP-TECH, it is not clear which one takes precedence. This is probably worth stating. * In Section 6.4.1 the IPFIX Template Record ascii art spans pages. Is it possible to insert a page break before this so that it appears in one page.