Document: draft-ietf-idr-cease-subcode-05.txt 
From: Lakshminath Dondeti 
Date: 13 april 2005 

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Review of 'Subcodes for BGP Cease Notification Message '
  <draft-ietf-idr-cease-subcode-05.txt> as a Proposed Standard

IETF LC ends 2005-04-08.

1.  Section 1 uses the old RFC2026 template and MUST be updated.
2. Editorial:  replace co-relating with correlating
3. Section 5:  In the text corresponding to Subcode 8, please replace 
Resource with Resources
4. There is only one figure, but I still suggest numbering it and 
putting a label on it.  Also, please make sure that the Figure does not 
span across two pages.
5. Replace "If a BGP speaker runs out of resource" with "If a BGP 
speaker runs out of resources"
6. There is no IPR statement.
7. There is also no indication of "track".  I presume the I-D is in 
standards track, and is in the proposed standard stage.

In summary, except for the templates etc., I have only minor editorial 
suggestions for improvement.
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