Draft: draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl-ext-mcm-06.txt
       draft-ietf-adslmi b-vdsl-ext-scm-08.txt 
Reviewer: Mary Barnes
Date: 2 februari 2005 


Assignment: 
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Two-Document ballot: 
Definitions of Managed Object Extensions for Very High Speed Digital
Subscriber Lines (VDSL) Using Multiple Carrier Modulation (MCM) Line
Coding (Proposed Standard) - 4 of 5 

draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl-ext-mcm-06.txt 

 Definitions of Managed Object Extensions for Very High Speed Digital
 Subscriber Lines (VDSL) Using Single Carrier Modulation (SCM) Line
 Coding (Proposed Standard) 

draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl-ext-scm-08.txt 

 Token: Bert Wijnen 
Reviewer:Ê Mary Barnes 

Summary: 
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Drafts are ready to publish as Proposed Standard, with the assumption
being that they've been run through the appropriate MIB validation
tools. See a few minor nits below. 

Nits (applicable to both drafts): 
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 - Global - many of the left `single quotes' are angled, whereas the
   right ones are straight up and down.  

 - Section 2.2.1 - Remove "(VTUC)" and "(VTUR)" from Vtuc and Vtur
   definitions. The acronym isn't defined anywhere, nor is it defined
   in RFC 3728, so having those terms preface the definitions adds no
   value and implies that Vtuc and Vtur have meaning beyond what's
   listed in the naming conventions. OR, "VTUC" and "VTUR" need to be
   expanded/defined. 

 - Section 4 - Contact-Info - Do the chairs need to be listed? I've
   not seen that done for other MIBs in other areas (but, I'm not a
   MIB expert). If they are going to be listed, I don't see why Bob
   needs to be listed twice. Why not just label him as
   "Co-chair/co-editor"? 

 

Nits (draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl-ext-scm-01.txt): 
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- Copyright date should be 2005.