I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-harrington-text-mib-doc-template-04.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2008-02-19 IETF LC End Date: 2007-02-07 IESG Telechat date: 2008-02-21 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication but the reviewer has two suggestions. Comments: > Appendix A. Change Log Presumably the Foreword to RFC Editor should request this to be removed. Ditto Appendix B which appears to be empty. > Appendix C. Text Template with Advice There should be advice that the I-D header and trailer boilerplate texts were current at the time of publication of the template, but must be checked for currency when the template is used. Like [[anchor6]]. Is there a plan to maintain a template with current boilerplate, or do we just hope everyone uses xml2rfc?