Gen Art Reviews


2. Protocol Actions

Reviews should focus on these questions: "Is this document a
reasonable basis on which to build the salient part of the Internet
infrastructure? If not, what changes would make it so?"

         

2.1 WG Submissions

         

2.1.1 New Item

     

Area

Date

INT

Jul 2

Default Router Preferences and More-Specific Routes (Proposed Standard) - 1 of 7

draft-ietf-ipv6-router-selection-05.txt

Token:

Margaret Wasserman

Reviewer

Mary Barnes



OPS

BGP Communities for Data Collection (BCP) - 2 of 7

draft-ietf-grow-collection-communities-04.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Token:

David Kessens

Reviewer:

Michael Patton



RTG

GMPLS Signaling Procedure For Egress Control (Proposed Standard) - 3 of 7

draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-egress-control-03.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Token:

Alex Zinin

Reviewer:

Scott Brim



OPS

Embedding Globally Routable Internet Addresses Considered Harmful (BCP) - 4 of 7

draft-ietf-grow-embed-addr-03.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Token:

David Kessens

Reviewer:

Spencer Dawkins



TSV

RTP Payload Formats for European Telecommunications Standardsv Institute (ETSI) European Standard ES 202 050, ES 202 211, and ES 202 212 Distributed Speech Recognition Encoding (Proposed Standard) - 5 of 7

draft-ietf-avt-rtp-dsr-codecs-03.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: RTP for distributed speech recognition was vetted by speechsc wg on occasion of RFC 3557

Token:

Allison Mankin

Reviewer:

Joel Halprin



SEC

Internet X.509 Public Key Infrastructure Operational Protocols: Certificate Store Access via HTTP (Proposed Standard) - 6 of 7

draft-ietf-pkix-certstore-http-08.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Token:

Russ Housley

Reviewer:

Mary Barnes



GEN

IETF Rights in Contributions (BCP) - 7 of 7

draft-ietf-ipr-subm-rights-fix-00.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: This is a fix to an erroneous boilerplate in RFC 3667

Token:

Harald Alvestrand

Reviewer:

Scott Brim



2.1.2 Returning Item

     

Area

Date

TSV

Signaling System 7 (SS7) Message Transfer Part 2 (MTP2) - User Peer-to-Peer Adaptation Layer (M2PA) (Proposed Standard) - 1 of 7

draft-ietf-sigtran-m2pa-12.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: Returning item to clear discuss

Token:

Jon Peterson

Reviewer:

John Loughney



SUB

Sep 9

Four-Document ballot: [Open Web Ballot] - 2 of 7

Protocol extensions for support of Differentiated-Service-aware MPLS Traffic Engineering (Proposed Standard) - 2 of 7

draft-ietf-tewg-diff-te-proto-07.txt

Note: Allison still has a DISCUSS without DISCUSS TEXT.
I need that text in order to go back to WG

Maximum Allocation Bandwidth Constraints Model for Diff-Serv-aware MPLS Traffic Engineering (Experimental)

draft-ietf-tewg-diff-te-mam-03.txt

Max Allocation with Reservation Bandwidth Constraint Model for MPLS/DiffServ TE & Performance Comparisons (Experimental)

draft-ietf-tewg-diff-te-mar-04.txt

Russian Dolls Bandwidth Constraints Model for Diff-Serv-aware MPLS Traffic Engineering (Experimental)

draft-ietf-tewg-diff-te-russian-06.txt

Token:

Bert Wijnen

Reviewer:

Lucy Lynch



SEC

Internet Key Exchange (IKEv2) Protocol (Proposed Standard) - 3 of 7

draft-ietf-ipsec-ikev2-15.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: Back on agenda to see if the new version clears the remaining DISCUSS positions.

Token:

Russ Housley

Reviewer:

Scott Brim



INT

DHCP Subscriber ID Suboption for the DHCP Relay Agent Option (Proposed Standard) - 4 of 7

draft-ietf-dhc-subscriber-id-07.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: Back on the agenda to see if the new version addresses Ted's discuss.

Token:

Margaret Wasserman

Reviewer:

Mark Allman



INT

RADIUS Attributes Sub-option for the DHCP Relay Agent Information Option (Proposed Standard) - 5 of 7

draft-ietf-dhc-agentopt-radius-08.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: On agenda to clear Thomas' and Bert's discusses or to clarify what issues persist.

Token:

Margaret Wasserman

Reviewer:

Spencer Dawkins



APP

OPES Callout Protocol Core (Proposed Standard) - 6 of 7

draft-ietf-opes-ocp-core-05.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: Back on agenda to check Steve's discuss

Token:

Ted Hardie

Reviewer:

Lucy Lynch



OPS

Basic Transition Mechanisms for IPv6 Hosts and Routers (Proposed Standard) - 7 of 7

draft-ietf-v6ops-mech-v2-06.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note:
Back to clear Steve's DISCUSS and for review of other minor changes.

Participant in PROTO Team pilot:
Working Group Chair Followup of DISCUSS Comments
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-discuss-pilot-01.txt

Token:

David Kessens

Reviewer:

Joel Halpern



2.2 Individual Submissions

         

2.2.1 New Item
      NONE
2.2.2 Returning Item
      NONE

3. Document Actions

         

3.1 WG Submissions

Reviews should focus on these questions: "Is this document a reasonable
contribution to the area of Internet engineering which it covers? If
not, what changes would make it so?"

         

3.1.1 New Item

     

Area

Date

INT

Fast Handovers for Mobile IPv6 (Experimental) - 1 of 5

draft-ietf-mipshop-fast-mipv6-02.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Token:

Thomas Narten

Reviewer:

John Loughney



INT

Hierarchical Mobile IPv6 mobility management (HMIPv6) (Experimental) - 2 of 5

draft-ietf-mipshop-hmipv6-02.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: 2004-09-09: AD review raises only minor issues, will put before the
entire IESG.

Token:

Thomas Narten

Reviewer:

John Loughney



SUB

Sep 9

Requirements for Inter-area MPLS Traffic Engineering (Informational) - 3 of 5

draft-ietf-tewg-interarea-mpls-te-req-02.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Token:

Bert Wijnen

Reviewer:

Mary Barnes



TSV

Requirements for Header Compression over MPLS (Informational) - 4 of 5

draft-ietf-avt-hc-mpls-reqs-03.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Token:

Allison Mankin

Reviewer:

Scott Brim



SEC

Examples of S/MIME Messages (Informational) - 5 of 5

draft-ietf-smime-examples-15.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Token:

Russ Housley

Reviewer:

Spencer Dawkins



3.1.2 Returning Item

     

Area

Date

RTG

OSPF Refresh and Flooding Reduction in Stable Topologies (Informational) - 1 of 2

draft-pillay-esnault-ospf-flooding-07.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: Back to try to talk to David about his DISCUSS

Token:

Bill Fenner

Reviewer:

Joel Halpern



OPS

PIM-SM Multicast Routing Security Issues and Enhancements (Informational) - 2 of 2

draft-ietf-mboned-mroutesec-03.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: This document was already reviewed by the IESG. The authors of this document felt
that they could improve the document significantly by adding a single paragraph.
You will only need to review the added paragraph:
'5.4  Passive Mode for PIM'

Token:

David Kessens

Reviewer:

John Loughney



3.2 Individual Submissions Via AD

Reviews should focus on these questions: "Is this document a reasonable
contribution to the area of Internet engineering which it covers? If
not, what changes would make it so?"

         

3.2.1 New Item

     

Area

Date

TSV

The TV-Anytime Content Reference Identifier (CRID) Uniform Resource Locator (Informational) - 1 of 2

draft-earnshaw-tv-anytime-crid-01.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: MMUSIC chairs reviewed the doc; saw no end-run around their IMG effort.

Token:

Jon Peterson

Reviewer:

Spencer Dawkins



TSV

Session Initiation Protocol Private Extension for an OSP Authorization Token (Informational) - 2 of 2

draft-johnston-sip-osp-token-06.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: RFC Editor Note:  Expand first use of UAC: User Agent Client, first use of UAS: User Agent Server
Expert reviewed according to process for P-Headers - thumbs-up from SIPPING

Token:

Allison Mankin

Reviewer:

Mary Barnes



3.2.2 Returning Item
      NONE

3.3 Individual Submissions Via RFC Editor

Reviews should focus on these questions: "Does this document
represent an end run around the IETF's working groups
or its procedures? Does this document present an incompatible
change to IETF technologies as if it were compatible?" Other
matters may be sent to the RFC Editor in private review.

         

3.3.1 New Item
      NONE
3.3.2 Returning Item

     

Area

Date

GEN

A Media Resource Control Protocol Developed by Cisco, Nuance, and Speechworks. (Informational) - 1 of 2

draft-shanmugham-mrcp-05.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Note: Verified with speechsc chairs that this is not an end-run around ongoing work there.

Token:

Jon Peterson

Reviewer:

Spencer Dawkins



GEN

Analysis of the Security of BGP/MPLS IP VPNs (Informational) - 2 of 2

draft-behringer-mpls-security-09.txt [Open Web Ballot]

Token:

Alex Zinin

Reviewer:

Joel Halpern